Sail erected,
call it ‘Hope’
Location
dialed in
Saboteurs
asleep
Done with
party persona,
inalterable
generalities
Ready to cater
to the awake
Willing to believe
in dreams
There’s a calm
opening, and
Sail is erected,
call it ‘Hope’.
Sail erected,
call it ‘Hope’
Location
dialed in
Saboteurs
asleep
Done with
party persona,
inalterable
generalities
Ready to cater
to the awake
Willing to believe
in dreams
There’s a calm
opening, and
Sail is erected,
call it ‘Hope’.
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Without hope, there would be no sails to catch the wind of destiny. 🙂
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Love that! Thanks.
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Awesome job VJ! ❤
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Thanks for your kind words
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I enjoyed the imagery of your poem, and yes hoist the sail, there is always hope. .. And I’d like to thank you for following my blog/website, muchly appreciated, I hope you enjoy reading my humble writings, and I’m from Geelong, Australia. I’m very interested in your “Dream Along With Me”… most of poems are generated through my dreams. Cheers. Ivor
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Thanks Ivor. I too write to keep my mind alert, to stay connected- enjoyed your ‘mission statement’. Dreams provide fodder for my poems as well – never-ending source
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Excellent poem 👍
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Thank you.
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This is lovely! I love the textures in the painting, is it one of yours?
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Thanks. It’s actually I photograph I took and altered with filters. Likely one I’ll try to paint.
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Hope your waters remain calm!
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Ha ha – me too. Thanks, Margy
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Lovely poem, and I like how the first stanza repeats at the end with a slight change of wording – and it gives the impression that hope does come round if we take our chances and move along. Lovely painting at the top too 🙂
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Thanks for your kind words, Mabel. I visited your blog and you have a unique and important voice to present to the world.
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No worries, V. And thank you for your kind words and for stopping by 🙂
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