Sensing foulness of mood
they slither out from dark places –
whirling wisps of putrid insinuation
Clever they are, and almost imperceptible
but I am clever also, have succumbed
one too many times to the deceit
will not be played by the mutterings
prodding me to find fault with others
to claim myself unjustly wronged.
With the force of a mountain
I stand fast, repel the daemons,
command uncompromising clarity.
Hissing with disappointment,
the spineless creatures retreat,
disappear to plot their next attack.
(Tonight’s prompt at dVerse comes from Jilly who challenges us to write about the unseen. I am also including this post in Ragtag Community’s challenge: play.)
Good ideas for taming the “monkey mind” negativity for sure.
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It’s a constant battle.
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Nothing like good old-fashioned self-doubt when it slithers around trying to wind itself around you. Love this!
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Thank you.
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Wow! The malevolence seethes in your words here….and is overcome in the end. I do love a positive ending! 🙂
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Thanks, Lillian. Me too
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Great personification of the paranoia and insecurity that can seep into our thoughts. When this happens I like to pretend that the world is conspiring to help me succeed.
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Ha ha – now that is some conspiracy theory.
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Nice stanza: “will not be played by the mutterings
prodding me to find fault with others
to claim myself unjustly wronged.”
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Thanks, Frank – it is a problem
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keep em at bay as best we can, without em we might not know what faith was. I like the shange from hissing soft descending sounds to crisp sharp clarions in the 4th stanza as the poet stands fast. Sound reflects the idea. Nissseleee Dunnne.
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Thank you, Lona.
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Ah, demons! Determined buggers, aren’t they? Love how you characterize them so viscerally. Great write!
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Thanks Frank.
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😇
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Battling those demons seems to be constant… good that you keep them at bay.
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some days…
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This gives new depth to the expression, ‘creeping out of the woodwork’.
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Ha ha…I suppose so.
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🙂
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Oooooh. Tensed and vivid! You built up this poem so well!
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Thank you!
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You have described it very well. Those moments of self-doubt can be very disheartening. I like the strength of this poem, standing firm as a mountain!
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Thank you.
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Insidious, unseen… yet so well-depicted! Keep the faith… it’s getting more difficult with each passing day.
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Thanks, Charley!
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You are much welcome!
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Outstanding word choices make this poem more than it appears on first read. Putrid insinuation / muttering – these give this poem a dank feel, like mildew creeping in, but your use of the sibilant sounds in the final stanza make us realize the serpent as it slinks away. We might not mind if it weren’t for the ending telling us it will be back; chills. Such grand writing!
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Thanks Jilly. I warned you my mood was rank, lol. Better now.
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Glad to hear it; also glad you make it work for you either way – good writing comes of it!
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Good for you! What a great attitude.
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Thank you. It is an ongoing battle.
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Ditto. It takes some hardcore intentionality.
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