Old houses exude charm:
walls whispering nostalgic
wonder, eliciting yearnings
buried deep within the soul.
Purchasers are spellbound,
transported to simpler times,
read mystical forecasts in
archways and carved nooks.
Committed, they settle in,
noting too late cosmetic
fixes, startled to uncover
structural faults, despair
to learn that the dreams
which built this place have
now crumbled and cracked,
repairs needed extensive.
Overhauling beyond means β
physically and financially β
old houses not only offer,
but test, character β beware.
(Originally posted July 2016.)
True and well written π
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bravo! very well written! β€
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Thanks!
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Marvelous imagery! And a marvelous cautionary tale, too β even if I do still miss my old fixer-upper house.
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Thanks, Heide. They tug at the heart strings, I know.
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Yes, buyer beware! We almost bought a character home, would have suited me to a tee, but then the inspection brought to light things which would not have suited my pocket book!
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Lucky that you were forewarned.
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Yes, and followed our heads instead of our hearts!
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