Was willing to settle
even before casting off
anchorless, with no compass
to guide me, no oar to steer
left fate to the currents
a vessel adrift, naïve
trusted those with power
to rescue me, unaware
of the target vulnerability
made of me, that sharks
like to circle wayward
boats, certain of a catch
no wonder, when finally
I came ashore, wrecked
I had lost faith in love,
turned hope to cynicism
had failed to register
the dangers of sailing,
into uncharted waters,
the necessity of navigational
resources, and a life jacket,
the knowledge to stay afloat
and safe, in a sea where
discernment saves hearts.
(Inspired by the image and Laura’s Manic Mondays 3 Way Prompt: wrecked)
Quite stunning 👏👏👍 I’am still adrift !!
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Oh no! Thanks though
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You hit a nerve with this one! And yet it is our vulnerability that makes us human and loveable.
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Thanks Susanne.
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Leaves me disheartened yet moved. You write so well V.J … this is my heart speaking 🙂
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Thanks, Diana.
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Beautiful. I am simply blown away.
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Don’t be blown away…you are already fighting floods. I need you well grounded and dry, lol.
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You’re too funny
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Not sure you meant to link to here – but welcome!
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Reblogged this on All The Shoes I Wear and commented:
Anotber stunning entry in Manic Mondays 3 Way Prompt!
Whoa! Wow! I know these lines as if I’d writtem them myself….known the words too familiar. ..to close to home. Its like the lines of a song….”read my letters….Read each one outloud.”
Powerful and striking. Beautiful!
Enjoy V. J’S Entry but sail over and visit her blog. She does not disappoint! 2😊 And. While your at it, submit your entry to Manic Mondays 3 Way Prompt!
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Yes! Let’s keep Laura going!
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Wow! I know these lines as if I’d writtem them myself….known the words too familiar. ..to close to home. Its like the lines of a song….read my letters….Read each one outloud.
Powerful and striking. Beautiful!
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Thanks Laura – no one ever prepared us, did they?
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Absolutely not, V.J. Not at all. I try to gleen what what good I can to pass to the next but the wisdom comes with a price…hefty cost, indeed. Bravo V.J. Bravo!
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