April, in Ontario, is as unpredictable
as my father’s temperament –
sometimes warm and encouraging,
sometimes icily treacherous
like that morning, in 1973, when
coaxed by the early appearance of buds
and the mildness of a morning breeze,
we donned confidence instead of coats.
By noon the winds has shifted direction –
rain rapidly turned to sleet then freezing,
and we children escaped school early,
sliding our way across yards, marvelling
at the force that had turned trees into
glass sculptures, imagined ourselves
arctic explorers returning home to
hot chocolate and mother’s worried brow.
Father had not been heard from in hours,
and the absence of traffic attested to
the impossibility of the roads, and we
felt the weight of helplessness descend
fearful for our father’s life,
fearful for his state of mind –
his storms no less frightening
than the one that raged outdoors.
A scratching on the front door
set us all on high alert, and in
stumbled father, a ringer for
the abominable snowman
his hair and brows dripping
icicles, his pallor wan despite
the blueness of lips, the reddish
chafingĀ of cheeks and nose –
one hand clenched in an icy fist
the other clamped onto a box
hoisted upon his shoulder – and
before anyone could utter a word
the ludicrousness of the situation
hit me, and unfiltered, I cried:
“You could have died out there,
but you saved your case of beer?”
Our challenge to day is to write about a family anecdote.
I was drawn into this story immediately. The images are so clear. I could just visualize your dad, frozen, coming through the door with a case of beer. Excellent read.
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Thanks, LuAnne.
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Loved the first 2 lines about your dad…”warm and encouraging…at times icily treacherous.” So sounded like my dad. And the poem ended in such a sweet, typically family sort of way.
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Thanks V. We never knew with him. The story is a legend in our house, ha ha.
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Ok. Thats funny.
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Love this .. and of course one must save the beer
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ha ha
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Great imagery leading to an ending quite laughable!
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Ha ha, thanks.
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Ah. A man with correct priorities and the courage to attend to them!
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Funny, that’s what he said, lol.
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“… his storms no less frightening than the one that raged outdoors.” Wonderful imagery, even if it does carry me back to a man in my own life whose rages terrified me. Your writing is marvelous, V. J.!
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Bless you Heide!
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I love the voice in the poem and the bit about the beer reminds me of my grandfather. He always similar priorities!
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Thanks so much. Yes, beer was the priority in those days, much to our chagrin.
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Quite the read! Did not expect the humor – nice twist at end. (Effective choice to end it where you did … letting us guess your father’s response.)
“donned confidence instead of coats” – love the energy in this phrase.
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Comic relief, I think it’s called. Hope things are warming up where you are – we’ve had nothing but rain.
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