Eternity, says the mountain
when referencing time
Centuries, says the forest
whose trees grace its side
Decades, say the roadway
who winds and weaves by
Hours, say the vehicles
who dare to make the drive
Seconds, says the victim
whose distraction is demise.
(Today’s NaPoWriMo challenge is to bring something big together with something small.)
Just Wonderful !!
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Thank you. I visited your blog. Love the sentiment behind your work.
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Thank you for your visit and appreciation!
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Hi! Just wanted to pop in and say
I Nominated you for The Liebster Award! Participate or not…you deserve this!
https://alltheshoesiwear.wordpress.com/2018/04/10/liebster-award/
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Hi Laura, I take this as such a compliment, and at the moment can’t accept it. Thank you though.
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This is an eloquent recognition of the scope of time. Lovely.
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Thank you, LuAnne.
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This one’s a WOW!
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Really? Thanks!
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Have been tooooo close to that last stanza! Some roads and conversation do NOT mix … driver needs full attention on road.
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Oh, for sure. That’s my point. Put the cell phones away while driving.
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Powerful image of time.
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Thank you – this was a challenging prompt.
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This is so rich on different levels. Nice! 💗
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Thank you.
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Excellent! I really liked this one a lot! 🙂
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Thank yo so much.
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That is powerful. And you made a case for rhyme being serious, too. You definitely succeeded with the challenge!
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Thanks Susanne. Did it rhyme? I didn’t notice, lol.
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