Seduced –
the virility of youth
irresistible even for an old
duck like me – so unexpected,
relentless, I ignore exhaustion
lean into the fantasy, allow
desire to embrace me,
cross a boundary,
surrender…
step up
to the stage,
bare-chested,
shameless, speak
into the mic, reveal
my words: those
childlike bits
of myself;
hope
my passion
does not offend,
the blatant sexuality
of my tongue, my voice,
raw desire, peaked arousal,
does not mar my reputation,
pathetic, really, that one so past
her prime should dare to grace the
boards – surely a younger woman’s game.
(Passion Exposed was penned in December of 2016 after attending my first poetry open mic. Having been a closet writer for most of my life, I still find it uncomfortable at times to share my words.)
This was really helpful.I’m currently in highschool and super confused,because I wan to do too many things at once!
This makes me feel like it’s okay.Great blog,definitely checking out your other posts!Id love for you to check out
mine as well<3
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Wanting to do everything when you are in high school (and bright, as you appear to be) is normal. I used to teach high school, and miss the energy, so thanks for dropping by. Your blog is upbeat and full of good insights. Glad my poem resonated with you.
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Awesome poem vj! Loved it! bet it got a great reaction too! xxx
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Thank you. It did.
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Passion properly expressed through words, those images in my mind…
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good ones, I hope…
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Extremely ” good”
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awesome…
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Oh, but I am so glad you do! Open mike sends chills down my spine. Bravo to you for having the courage to speak out!
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thanks…
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The way your words have an air of double entendré is quite titillating… 😆
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Thank you for noticing…
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I think people like us more for the vulnerabilities we reveal on stage.
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Likely…it’s just unnerving, and also rewarding.
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Love both the shape (visual) and sweet substance of this … bravo!
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Thanks for noticing the shape – I thought it worked out well. Thank you also for your encouraging words.
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I loved the shape! Inventive and pleasing to behold V.J…
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I love the line ” allow desire to embrace me” It’s like you didn’t let the fear overpower you. I for one am so pleased that you share your words. I think you are an amazing poet and everytime I read your writing, I try to learn something from it.
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Thank you! What a wonderful compliment. I think we all learn from one another.
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I LOVE THIS. I too have been that older woman, feeling inferior and insecure among the radiant youngsters with their smooth skin and firm bodies, telling myself I am ridiculous and should act my age. But we are made of *so much* more than just our skin and bodies! We are our life experience, our wisdom, our heartbreak, our hope, our passion … and as long as we are alive, we should keep speaking our truth. Good for you for having the courage to do just that. xx
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Thanks, Heide. And you are right, we are so much more.
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Love this! RECOGNIZE these feelings. Reading poetry aloud to even one other, and especially to a group of others, amounts to stripping naked, baring parts always there, but usually modestly under wraps.
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Exactly. It takes courage, for sure.
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Thank you for this! I can truly relate. I was widowed 9years ago, started thinking about relationships 3 or 4 years later.. I found it quite the conundrum. 24 years of a husband complaining that I didn’t like sex enough. (5 kids.. I was tired ! ) And all of a sudden I’m a slut, or my favorite.. of a Jezebel Spirit.. for admitting to liking sex .. for being straight forward and not playing virginal games.. because I’m old you know….it’s unseemly.. a young woman’s game !
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Love it! Good for you. Our passions never die – unless we let them.
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“surely a younger woman’s game”…maybe, but to truly grace the boards a women must be wise to where the floor creaks, and this speaks to that…
Regards,
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Well thank you! Stopped by your blog…nice to meet you.
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