From the North we travelled,
left just as autumn’s brilliance
retreated under the startling
white of winter’s cold breath
Drove through towns grayed
by overcast skies, witnessed
a reversal of seasons, return
of burnt oranges, rusted reds
until green gave over to desert
hues – chalky yellow hills with
dusty, low shrubs, burnt umbers
and muted violet prickly pears
Westward we drove, over wide
open spaces, followed rivers
into mountains, tracked birds,
wildlife, the mystery of saguaro
Encountered red rocks and black
mountains, the Colorado, and
further expanses of barren land
desolation betraying hard times
Continued on till highways widened
and the congestion of civilization
startled us out of our desert sedation
tossed us back into urban bustle
Then we turned north, headed back
to the mountains, now green, rolling,
promising milder temperatures and
the reassurance of flowing river beds
In time, we’ll turn eastward, set our
compass for home, knowing that
there will be disquiet, this lust for
wandering settling in old bones.
(The image is from my personal collection. To read more about our adventures on the road, visit me at One Woman’s Quest II.)
I really admire the tone you set in this piece, madam, whereby I feel myself comfortably buckled up in the back seat, unhurriedly watching the changing scenery and seasons. Thank you for the ride.
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Thank you for your kind words. I have just visited with your blog and am happy to make your acquaintance.
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You’re welcome. The pleasure is mine. 🙂
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Very powerful writing!
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Appreciate the encouragement.
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Very vivid images – well done!
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Thank you, Jo!
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The journey never ends. I’m sure your mental landscape was traveling along with the changes in the physical one as well. (K)
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It sure was…
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That is a lovely verse, journeying through spaces and a wide expanse of territory. It’s so thrilling to even wonder about such an experience. I liked all the views that you presented.
-HA
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Thanks, HA. Difficult to capture in words the wonder of what we’ve experienced.
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Thank you for letting me ride along on your trip! I love the phrase ‘the startling white of winter’s cold breath’ and the sudden flash of ‘burnt oranges, rusted reds’ in the second stanza, and the way the seasons flash by in all their colours. Living on this small island, as Bill Bryson called it, I can’t begin to imagine all that space! But, from travelling around Europe, and once to New York, I do appreciate the homecoming.
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Thanks Kim – nice to have you along.
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I am envious of your travelling and see those landscapes and creatures through so many seasons ~ Thanks for sharing and I will you well on your next adventure ~
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Thanks Grace, we have been most fortunate.
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Nice line: “the reassurance of flowing river beds” I like how that flowing water provides reassurance.
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After so many dry river beds in the desert, the ones with water felt reassuring…somehow more life giving, lol.
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I love the way you describe a nomadic life, capturing the best of the seasons… I have done pieces of this, but never in an RV and never longer than four weeks.
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I had to pinch myself frequently – couldn’t believe it was happening.
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kaykuala
there will be disquiet, this lust for
wandering settling in old bones.
A good idea to take a breather before going again. Not rushing can be very useful, VJ !
Hank
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We are currently on a breather…so much to process. Thanks for taking time to read.
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Love this. I’m visiting my elderly mother so I have a few moments during dozes to catch up on some reading. All the best, Colin.
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Thanks Colin. Hope your mother is is well.
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This would be my kind of roadtrip, full of nature’s glory and the change of seasons. I liked your ability to capture the change in scenery from east to west.
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Thank you – I am so blessed to be able to take this journey.
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Love your use of color in this. Conjured some lovely images.
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Thank you M.P.! Appreciate the feedback.
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I absolutely love the last line, lovely poem VJ
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.
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I wish to travel this with you… Already it was so realistic that i felt present in ur past… 👏👏👏
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Thank you! You can join us in spirit. This has been a dream come true.
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Wow… I liked it.. I will definitely join u in spirit… 👍👍Love n peace ❤️❤️
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This is beautifully crafted and (at the risk of sounding insufferably po-faced) the poem mirrors the journey in that it achieves what you set out to do!
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Thank you – it was one of those middle of the night writes – you know when you wake up and it’s there.
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What a wonderful journey. Beautifully written, V.J. , landscape paintings being created in my mind as I read your words.
Safe trip home !
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Thanks Deborah!
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