A landmark in my life, the river follows
ages, and eras: seasons measured by her flow
She acknowledges changes, bears the winter
regally, swells with confidence as Spring rains
Will walk beside me in sunnier times, and
hold my secrets as Autumn catches us in her flames
She holds my heart, my faith, always knows
and at the end of the day, oh how she glows.
(Originally posted on One Woman’s Quest II, March 2019. Image my own)
This was as pristine as a river itself and with such a soulful soothing tone too
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Thank you
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Beautiful image and such a wonderful message about the river, VJ!
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Thanks Susi
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You’re very welcome, VJ!
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great river and heart connections – enjoyed this, VJ
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Thanks Yvette!
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🙂
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This speaks my language VJ.
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Our poetic hearts concur 💕
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❤️
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Wonderful poetry 👏🤩😍💕🤗✨
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Thabk you!
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So beautiful VJ!
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Thank you!
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Such companionship is really amazing 🙂
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Yes. It is.
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I enjoyed how you took us through all the seasons with this analogy. I also loved how you used “Spring rains” as a noun-verb instead of the usual adjective-noun use. I paused and smiled.
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Thanks LuAnne. I love it when readers pick up the nuances
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I love your poem. Nature is so good at providing the constant we need as we go through life.
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Yes it is! Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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In the mountains for the past half-century, but I grew up beside a river & you’ve captured it perfectly VJ. Thanks. I esp love seasonal approach.
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Thanks Ron.
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Magical! 🙂
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😊💕
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So beautiful! To have such a constant in life is a blessing. This has my heart, VJ. ❤️
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Thank you, and yes, it the constant’s in nature that sustain.
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You are so welcome and yes, I agree.
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A beautiful poem VJ
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Thank you Sadje!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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